Review - Beautifully written and executed. What a talented writer you are. So much expressed, so much said, in so few words. Tugged at the heart strings and kept me riveted to the end. Loved the way you wrapped it all up at the end. Leaving the reader to 'read' between the lines. Thank you for sharing this. Magnificent job. Robynn
I was in tears at the start and smiling through the floods by the end. What a beautiful story and so well written. I could see and feel the pain of the characters.
Take note people, this is a wonderful example of a ‘show not tell’ story.
Kudos John, consider my heartstrings well and truly pulled.
of a trauma that happens to often. On page 8 when Eli wonders if his wife is ready to move on. What reason would he have thought that? Because she choose not to come. Both seem to be at a point when life goes on, despite the hurt that will never end. Minor word changes,or editing.